Tuesday, April 29, 2008
Hope
See I'm at a position where a physician isn't the answer...my only answer is having forlorn glances towards a sea of obscurity because I'm unsure when the next ray of hope will come...hope is simply a facade...a cop out...a way to provide stability towards the unstable...to ensure the ones who are unsure...why pursue hope in a world destitute of certainty?...such an incredulous act seems feasible in the minds of the pursuer...maybe I'm crazy for searching deep within myself for that glimmer of hope which could be the catalyst to my life...maybe I'm facetious for trying to establish such a feat...because this is the same kid who suffered from an identity crisis...his whole swag is frivolous...Chunky to Chunk sizzle to Sizzle to CL...the dude who entered withdrawals because his mindset wasn't in the same class as his peers...the dude whose fear of being neglected interfered with the logic of being accepted...yeah I'm that dude whose trying to find hope...
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That was good..... i feel u on that one...
Modern Day Hughes...I think you've finally found a stigma. This might be your best piece yet...keep it going. I don't want to be lonely at the top...we going to get this...keep "Hope" alive.
portrays the image of a true realist writer only the abstract thinker can relate.
wow carl, you have a talent with words.
You took me somewhere there. I felt the fear and doubts that you were going through when you wrote your words. I was moved and felt like leaving some inspiring words.
"Different does NOT mean DEFICIENT." - Jeremiah Wright.
"Don't simply WEAR confidence, humility, and intelligence. BE
those things! REDEFINE those words and adapt them to fit you as
you are!" - Cathartic Keys
Yea, i definitely agree with someone who commented on your previous post:
off paper you can definitely be a blonde sometimes, but on paper you're a brunette lol.
...that word a day really helps huh? lol
i'm feeling it kid...might have to start publishing with me pretty soon.
I really like this one.
it's very relatable
this ones pretty good too,but you still seem a little uncomfortable with the diction... the wording is a little awkward in certain places... also I'm not completely sure what you're trying to say... is hope a cop out? and if it is why are you looking for it?
still i thought it was a good read, good job man
I like it chunk sizzle, the fact that its a reflection of your life makes it more effective and powerful
keep it from the heart and you can't ever go wrong
I like it Chunk Sizzle, the fact that your talking from experience makes this piece much more effective and powerful
Aww Carl, this is soo great. Speak your mind and don't hold back. You'll find hope one day, when you least expect it, however, just wondering, if you believe hope will never come, why still look? You need to make that transition at the end clear, such as you realize that you do need hope and that you are still looking, something like that (if that's what you are trying to say). But its good, keep it up! :)
HOPE LIVES CARL HOPE LIVES
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